Editing Day #1

From the first day of editing I learned that I need to use either quotes and/or other outside resources. I saw how that sort of "proves" your point, especially in this kind of essay. I think if I had some kind of research about both of the artist's works that I used in my essay, it would help give some kind of creditability to my opinion. It's funny how people tend take people's opinions as truth if the person seems to be extremely knowledgeable on the subject. Thus, with this being the way society functions, adding research or history will help my paper greatly. I think having this addition to my paper will give me a little more confidence in my opinion. In other words, I'll feel like I have something to back up my opinion.